
The Script Gymnasium
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Script Consulting services
Complete Script Consulting Package
In the realm of script consulting, award-winning writer Phillip E. Hardy offers a unique twist to help writers improve their work. Not only will he help you to strengthen the pace, dialogue, action, and readability of your screenplay, he will assist you with your unique voice as a storyteller. For a limited time, he is offering an introductory price package that will include, complete script notes on your entire Final Draft, Word document, or PDF file screenplay, which includes correcting obvious typos and offering an evaluation of your narrative and dialogue throughout the script. He will also provide you with a written evaluation of your entire screenplay, a script scorecard for essential elements, and an evaluation of your synopsis and logline if required, with suggestions on how to make your work stand out. $250.00
Contact me at phillip_hrdy@yahoo.com and I'll send paypal invoice.

First Twenty Pages of your script
In the realm of script consulting, award-winning writer Phillip E. Hardy offers a unique twist to help writers improve their work. Not only will he help you to strengthen the pace, dialogue, action, and readability of your screenplay, he will assist you with your unique voice as a storyteller. For a limited time, he is offering an introductory price package that will include, script notes on the first twenty pages of your Final Draft, Word document, or PDF file screenplay, which includes correcting obvious typos and offering an evaluation of your narrative and dialogue throughout the script. He will also provide you with a written evaluation of the first twenty pages of your screenplay, a script score card for essential elements, and an evaluation of your synopsis and logline if required, with suggestions on how to make your work stand out. Price: $75.00
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I also provide assistance with loglines and pitch decks. To inquire about fees email me at phillip_hrdy@yahoo.com